@SerpensR nah, What i mean is it is just a failed expectation. Leave it at page 27 would be perfect, just right when you as reader, and her to find out that all is real and she is about to be the next "victim", or member 😅. Just end there, nothing more need to add. you have all the information, You have the nightmare. Done, a perfect ending. there is nothing else need to add,
But no, it keep going, keep me wonder maybe there are more. No, there nothing more. It is just some obvious out come that i know will happen, one way or another. Doesn't need these information in last page. It also ruin the scary quite a lot