That would be an improvement over the actual situation.Only 5 chapters left. Time to:
1) stall for 3 chapters
2) use the second to last chapter for her to reveal her identity
3) use the last chapter for a confession within the last 20% of the work.
i'll be back in 5 chapters to see which one(s) was/were rightOnly 5 chapters left. Time to:
1) stall for 3 chapters
2) use the second to last chapter for her to reveal her identity
3) use the last chapter for a confession within the last 20% of the work.
wow more or less correcti'll be back in 5 chapters to see which one(s) was/were right