I Love My Yandere Neko Girlfriend (New)

[Kuroageha]

It wasn't that bad but really needs practice.

 

[KazumiSangaku]

No...it's pretty bad, deviant art mixed with fanfiction dot net levels of bad. What it needs is some basics of storytelling, like not using those "2 minutes later" cuts and pointing out what should be obvious from the context like the kid's dad. "Show, don't tell" is also important, there's a lot of manga out there with lots of exposition, but only because it's difficult or impossible to show, you should never have a moment where you say something happened and then show it in a flashback, just show it and have what was "said" appear in it as narrator text. It also needs to make up its mind about what it wants to be, it could have been what's on the tin, a story about a yandere catgirl, instead it's a single chapter of showing a yandere catgirl and then the rest derails into an attempt at a superhero origin story, which if it was just to meet the girl could've been done in a single chapter. As for the art, that just needs more practice, it'll come in time.

It's not good or helpful to say something "isn't bad" just to be nice, and it definitely doesn't help to just say "it's bad." Author, if you actually want to get better, go read actual books or manga, not fan fiction, and look into storytelling tips, google is your friend. And keep practicing your art. Browse some image sites and to get some inspiration on your own style and practice every day. Every. Day. Even if it's just a sketch. That's not a jab at you, that's how it is for all artists to keep their skills honed and continue to improve, there's not an artist out there that thinks they've reached perfection.

 

[fresthy]

To whoever drew this, don't be discouraged by those trolls. Surely your manga have rough edges here and there, but for a seven years old, you are ahead of most kids of your age. Keep up the good work and keep drawing.

 

[Diyonite]

🤔🤔🤔its not bad ,better than my drawing XD

 

[dysperwithaperiod]

this guy is like 7 years old and we expected it to be good lol.

 

[justforthelulz]

I was wondering what the lowest rated (non 0.00) manga on the site was today.

 

[Zones]

How does it have such a low rating with no chapters? lol

 

[dysperwithaperiod]

@Zones i think they all got deleted.

 

[DeezNutsSlayer69_sexnumber_xD]

BRUH

 

[BullyHunter]

Cringe. Just cringe.

 

[metas]

Out of all the comics on this website, this is the lowest rated. Literally the lowest rated. The only things that are lower than it are the ones with no ratings at all. This got a lower rating than actual torture porn.

 

[cyphexada]

@fresthy Nice one dude

 

[cyphexada]

It has 7.99* on a Webtoons.com btw
Imagine.

 

[Hollowlegs]

@metas Torture porn has its merits

 

[Danthefan]

Wow the trash has come back! Hello tadxsarah comics lmao

 

[worldsprotagonist]

Firstly damn that river was deeper than the ocean and secondly how is a angel surprised to see a spirit? You know it's actually not that bad.

The art is unique I mean I can't draw for shit so.

 

[dabson]

The art is garbage @worldsprotagonist
Dont even pretend it's good.

 

[randyrandyson]

congratulations, you have found the (as of march 31, 2020) lowest rated manga on mangadex

 

[Tomzai]

This is like something from early 2000's deviantart

 

[flxsemi]

i had to sort through 150 pages just to see the record holder here on MD