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What are you expecting from KR novel lol.The leaders are all retarded what the heck lol.
What are you expecting from KR novel lol.The leaders are all retarded what the heck lol.
I feel like the world building is a bit messy. Mainly because the author just add a bunch of stuff without proper set up. But, what I dislike the most is the other character being arogan and jerk just for the sake of antagonizing the mc. I really hate this kind of trope.
Well, I will keep reading this series tho. Just because I like the genderswap story and the thing I mention before is something than I can still stomach for now.
I dunno... maybe some kind of decent writing from the author? Just a little you know?What are you expecting from KR novel lol.
It's an idiot ball plot.I feel like the world building is a bit messy. Mainly because the author just add a bunch of stuff without proper set up. But, what I dislike the most is the other character being arogan and jerk just for the sake of antagonizing the mc. I really hate this kind of trope.
Well, I will keep reading this series tho. Just because I like the genderswap story and the thing I mention before is something than I can still stomach for now.
Seems decent so far also what's the point in not telling ppl who the Mc really is
All the characters are retarded. The author is retardedThe leaders are all retarded what the heck lol.
I've gotten the impression from the offset that the genderbent side of the story is just a case of "Today Episode: The Writer's Barely-Disguised Fetish". Its always felt by and large completely and utterly pointless to the overall story when, like you said, you'd think someone who got that bombshell suddenly dropped into their lap would be a LOT more concerned about it.The glossing over of whatever deal was made that turned him into a girl is the most convoluted part so far. It's like the author made up three different reasons why, and forgot each of the earlier reasons because of how abrupt and indirect each scene about it is.
If it was intentionally done it sucks, and if it was an accident it also sucks. Same thing with students just suddenly attacking each other. It ruined all the setup up to that point for the test, and the reader is just supposed to infer that they get to play by separate rules.
It's like someone who can write takes a break every 12 panels and someone who can't takes over for 5 panels. Sad, because there is a lot that is interesting and presented well.