I tried writing a light/web novel

[cronqvist917]

It's still on going and it's just currently at its bare. Would it be okay to ask your opinion about it?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/144054/freezing-rain

It's a tensei one slice of life. Hope you like it.

 

[Taogeru]

My rating will be 8,4320482993/10,1728836186.
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The punctuation(?) Or that thingy like (, . ) is kind of mess up in some of the sentence, but i see the growth bit by bit.
This is my honest rating, i can see where this is going. And this novel is good for oneshot honestly imo, but you can do what you want.
There's something i find kinda make me perplexed, henceforth this novel reminds me of other novel that i forgot.
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Keep up the good work, and maybe when you get a bigshot. You can call me :3

 

[cronqvist917]

My rating will be 8,4320482993/10,1728836186.
.
.
.
The punctuation(?) Or that thingy like (, . ) is kind of mess up in some of the sentence, but i see the growth bit by bit.
This is my honest rating, i can see where this is going. And this novel is good for oneshot honestly imo, but you can do what you want.
There's something i find kinda make me perplexed, henceforth this novel reminds me of other novel that i forgot.
.
.
Keep up the good work, and maybe when you get a bigshot. You can call me :3

Hey thank you so much!

I deeply appreciate it! I hope you'll follow this novel. I deeply appreciate your rating and you reading it.