I Want To Live With You Happy Ever After. - Ch. 1 - Prologue.

[MangaDex]

 

[solamente]

hi quick tip: the author's emotional pain and inner conflict is best to keep as subtext. spoiling it on the first chapter takes all the oomph out of it. it's great for me as a reader that you're interestingly deranged and unhappy - but the golden rule still applies: "show don't tell", right?

 

[JethroBodine]

Is this an alt account for Kuga Tsuniya? I recognize those bags under the eyes.

 

[0_Aling_0]

hi quick tip: the author's emotional pain and inner conflict is best to keep as subtext. spoiling it on the first chapter takes all the oomph out of it. it's great for me as a reader that you're interestingly deranged and unhappy - but the golden rule still applies: "show don't tell", right?

sorry for that, I've removed it from the chapter.
Thank you for telling me that and I'll talk less about the story in my notes and spoiling it.

 

[0_Aling_0]

Is this an alt account for Kuga Tsuniya? I recognize those bags under the eyes.

No, I'm just a fan of Kuga Sensei and was heavily inspired by Kuga Sensei's style.

 

[JethroBodine]

No, I'm just a fan of Kuga Sensei and was heavily inspired by Kuga Sensei's style.

Ah, now I get it.