I really don't care what the characters looks like, as long as they're not a doodle draw. Anyway, about the plot... I felt sorry for Leo... and for Zion, I really don't know why he chose her even though he knew that she is the ex gf of his friend.. so it's kinda unnerving for me. (I hope there's a good justification for this)
Maybe, we don't know, that both 1st ML and 2nd ML planning something bad against the FL.. I'll just stick around and see what will happen. I'm enjoying reading this.