I'm going to spitball my thoughts, it's all over the place though
Started strong, but the melodrama overshadowed any hint of romance. Ended bittersweet but absolutely hollow. Seriously like from 23 or 25 onwards it was like a decline and went on for far too long. In end, the melodrama kept the story below sea level from how much it declined, if that makes sense. Towards 42 to 45 it picks up again but it fell so far that it feels lackluster and can never recover lost ground.
I love melodrama but this overstayed it's welcome and barely got any satisfaction whatsoever. I do appreciate the growth the two had but it felt hollow, like they gotten far in their lives but barely any true character development. Maybe that's thematic but a couple of more chapters of them navigating their relationship would have offset the admittedly crap show of drama the manga was subjected to.
It's a shame, I thought it would be good but it's really kinda disappointing imo. Guy wimped out on a kiss to end it on a stronger note too, could have showed that he really did miss her for that long. It's about lost opportunities sure, but it really felt like they were edging the reader on will-they won't-they, to the point it became agonizing to read.
My opinion is subjective at the end of the day, but come on, I can't be the only one who was disappointed with how the story turned out, right?
Thanks for translating all the chapters though, it was still quite the treat to read, even if the story arguably fell apart.