Wait, what makes this story so good? Kinda feels a bit terrible; I mean, maybe I'm not sensitive enough to the subtle elements, but it's kind of hard to follow and feels a bit boring for me.
Am I missing something? Like in the convo between the black-haired girl and her friend, the friend mentioned the blonde-haired girl as a "certain girl that was trying to hit on you." What? If anything, it seemed to be the other way around.