Not gonna lie, the first few chapters had me hooked. But holy shit, the rest just became utter slop and borderline unreadable.
While I’m fine with the protag being helpless at first, the idea he would just let this shit continue by the time he’s 22 is just unrealistic. While he could have just killed her back when the high school event happened, considering he is still an adolescent I could understand being piss frightened with the other girl’s life on the line. But when he’s an adult? At the point he’s letting her make a girl piss herself in public and that’s where it just devolves into slop. Which at that point there’s two of you, just kill her or knock her out and be done with it. It really got to the point the bitch uses words and that alone is enough to make two full grown adults not team up and kick her ass but instead act piss frightened… in public… with an entire train full of people. Yeah. No.
Speaking of piss, there’s honestly some weird fetishy shit that’s in here with the humiliation. I know the idea is “she just the fucked up”, but it’s still off putting.
Anyway, it’s overall a sloppy at ory with good setup. But to anyone who think this story is at all in any shape “realistic”, you’re retarded and must have very little faith in the justice department.