I'll Save This Damned Family! - Ch. 14

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I think this arc was just poorly written, everything was great until they introduced the 2nd Prince.
Maybe I will reread it all later but it just seems to be bad writing when it comes to whatever the situation is.
 
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My small brain couldn't understand this conversation...

How did we end up with the butler being sus ?

And why wasn't she suspect of her family? She knew from the start that are bad people...
 
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I dont know whats happening but that escalated fast, poor butler. Im getting secondhand embarrassment for mc too, fudge. I feel betrayed, she is presented to be smart and all but not even 15 chapters in, that got yeeted out lol also the prince gave me headache, i know he maybe right but can he tone it down. Their whole convo just kinda off for me :((
 
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wow this chapter was poorly written or poorly translated i'm not sure which but what the prince said makes no sense took a situation and made it 10 times more complicated.
For a ML right now he seems like an arrogant pain.
 
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I'm glad I'm not the only one who was completely lost. That was waaaay overcomplicated for what really happened, he was just dancing around the issue and questioning her like she was fucking 7, and she responded like she was fucking 7. I appreciate that the fl isn’t getting her way all the time and is being called out for being arrogant, cause she kinda is like why don’t you have a back up plan or more forethought? But this guy is just waaaay too much of a jerk, I liked that he was portrayed as having a super strong sense of justice but this is just sadistic. Honestly I feel like their conversation could've been shorted to like 5 sentences but instead we got this confusing rambling bullshit.
 
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This was just
It could’ve been good without all his “jumping around” from the topic
I like how there’s genuine conflict rn and I can also understand both pov’s (kinda ig) BUT DAMN IS IT STILL ANNOYING
 
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I'm so confused and the fact that the image quality was so poor really did not help. Between confusingly bad visuals, confusing translation, and confusingly bad writing, I think I went a little cross eyed trying to figure out what was going on in this chapter. I honestly dont think it was the translation team's fault at the end of the day, though, this entire thing was so convoluted and uneccesary for the plot. It could have been pushed into a third of this chapter and had better effect
 
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Omg i'm not sure what exactly is happening but i'm sure if one thing : i hate him 😬🤢🤮
He seems to like belittling people doubled with a jerk personality,and even if he is the one who is played with ( due to the teacher homework) , he is still the one who should hate himself the most since he is the most arrogant, confident with his knowledge out of the 2 🙃
Ahhh yet another ML to add to my list :jerk Ml that no backstory will redeem
 
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I'm confused and I can only make guesses - is it that the butler is actually a middleman involved with the scam? Maybe that's how even the maids and other employees knew about this "investment opportunity" because the butler was secretly spreading it. So when FL recruited the butler (and maybe others) in her plans, the butler used her plans for his own agenda too and so technically FL got involved in the scam unknowingly and can be framed as an accomplice and so ML questioned her why her confidence/biases/blindspots got herself into trouble and still didn't realize it although he arrogantly gave her a chance to try to convince him she's not involved? and now since she agreed she'd face the consequences, so she technically got into a disadvantaged position and have to make a deal with the prince and so that's how they work together as a fake couple thingy as seen in early intro chp.
 
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Hmm I really don’t get why this crashes on iOS on iPad. It is fine on pc or on my android phone, but why does it crash for iOS?
 
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I think author tries to be clever in "readers dont have access to this information, but this character knows it and it makes him smart" way.
Or its good old humiliation porn "I wanted to hear abcdef and you said abcdfe instead! Being only 95% correct is the most shameful thing you could possibly do! Humiliate yourself! Act like neither of us has any pride or shame! For a minute or so, its no big deal anyway, have some pride, woman!".
Its literal "guess the word I am thinking" riddle.
 
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Whelp, worked on PC so read there, but I just wanna say, that prince is an arrogant asshat that's overly confident himself. I want him to fall.
 

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