I'm Being Raised by Villains - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Like always a pete peeve of mine: It was said there is magic in this world, the way it was said everyone has mana, as such the main focus of the MC should be to learn magic as much as they can as it would be essential for their own survival if nothing else.
I doubt it will happen and the MC will likely fall in the trap of "following the story" and try to not meet the bad ending or something like that instead of focusing on what is really important since, as aways, the bad ending just happens because of how the character in the story acted and not because of who the character is.
 
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Pet Peeve of mine - who writes a story where randomly the narration goes "and then horrible things happen to this one person that has no connection to the plot. Anyway, back to the main story!"

Just is kinda immersion breaking
 
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Pet Peeve of mine - who writes a story where randomly the narration goes "and then horrible things happen to this one person that has no connection to the plot. Anyway, back to the main story!"

Just is kinda immersion breaking
Seriously, in what context was this character established?
At least say like, "the MC hears about how terrible the House is. They kicked out a five year old girl named so and so for turning into a lizard".

Don't just say what happened to her!
 
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Why is she looks like a squirrel than a lizard? I wish she never grow so i can see this squirrel forever!! :huh:
 
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Why do all the names sound like they would read better backwards?
 
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Since we're talking about pet peeves, what happened to her to cause her to reincarnate? What about her family? Did we need to see them and their treatment of her if there's going to be no resolution with them?

I hate when isekais set up these circumstances and plots threads from the MC's prior life, but those threads just cut off with their new life. I know that's how it would be in real life (if we reincarnated), but this is a story and such unresolved things are annoying.

Hopefully the family reincarnated as the villains of this story or something
 
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Pet Peeve of mine - who writes a story where randomly the narration goes "and then horrible things happen to this one person that has no connection to the plot. Anyway, back to the main story!"

Just is kinda immersion breaking
Seriously, in what context was this character established?
At least say like, "the MC hears about how terrible the House is. They kicked out a five year old girl named so and so for turning into a lizard".

Don't just say what happened to her!
It's literally the first chapter.

But,if we consider that she's in a web novel(not a visual novel for once),a prediction that can be made is the author of said novel decided to make a joke character plot that was popular enough that they expanded upon it slightly,it could even just be an account of the events that happened in the past that allows the main cast in the main story to find an item/person/clue to progress the story.
 
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It's literally the first chapter.

But,if we consider that she's in a web novel(not a visual novel for once),a prediction that can be made is the author of said novel decided to make a joke character plot that was popular enough that they expanded upon it slightly,it could even just be an account of the events that happened in the past that allows the main cast in the main story to find an item/person/clue to progress the story.
I have yet to see any indication in this webcomic thus far that the character was written for anything other than some random tragic death, at least in all the English scans.
 
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I have yet to see any indication in this webcomic thus far that the character was written for anything other than some random tragic death, at least in all the English scans.
How would you?,she completely changed the storyline and even her own memories seemed to be tampered with,considering she lacks a lot of foresight.
 

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