Man, I've read till chapter 30 rn, I'll probably update it if I read it further but.... As for the first 30 chapters.., I originally started reading to see a cute father and daughter relationship but then author kept adding more and more characters and gave it a reverse-harem and romance twist. All the male characters are just trash, I don't like them a bit. It just fell off for me, if this keeps up then I'll be dropping this.
Man, I've read till chapter 30 rn, I'll probably update it if I read it further but.... As for the first 30 chapters.., I originally started reading to see a cute father and daughter relationship but then author kept adding more and more characters and gave it a reverse-harem and romance twist. All the male characters are just trash, I don't like them a bit. It just fell off for me, if this keeps up then I'll be dropping this.
litteral forshadowing
there is... something, warping things, and as far as I can tell, the discomforting feeling in the later chapters is intentional.
author seems to be extremely good at sublty, and tone, and I genuinely don't know where the story is going right now
my biggest worry is there are a couple ways things can go, and there's a certain chekhov's gun that's hanging on the wall, that I'm very much not a fan of. I'd heavily recommend just outright dropping the series if it is added.
that aside, the actual story has a couple of paths it can take from my point of view, several are quite depressing, and most of them have the ability to be good, although some of them are a bit meta
that's the one other complaint I have about the story. it's very prone to dropping in stupid meta things, and they can be very awkward
personally, I'd like to see a wholesome tie-up of the current forshadowing, but I'm not the writer
it also could be a coincidence, but I think most of the story is pretty solidly set up
I really like this. The first chapter was not very good, but when things get going it gets interesting, and it did a few things i hadn't seen on the genre, though there's also a number of details that they didn't explain at all, for example:
They don't explain how she was teleported to the orphanage. Now later on they might explain it by saying it was her dragon powers, but i think they're just going to ignore it.
oh great, another story with an MC who lives more in her dreamworld/memories then in the present and thus always overlooks the obvious. Let me guess, the og heroine is actually evil, right?! ... f this.
oh great, another story with an MC who lives more in her dreamworld/memories then in the present and thus always overlooks the obvious. Let me guess, the og heroine is actually evil, right?! ... f this.
I am guessing the OG heroine is bad for the world, but she's not evil or even against the MC in any way at any point. She's in the heroine's fanclub. The og MC literally dies weeks before the og heroine shows up in the story. The og MC was just there for suspense of what could have happened.
Starting on this, but I have to say I hate when any of these have a child who was kicked out or hated poor behavior. The whole it has been determined at 8 years old that you're a horrible person because you don't behave like a polite adult.