Imokusa Reijou desu ga Akuyaku Reisoku wo Tasuketara Kiniiraremashita - Vol. 4 Ch. 17 - Unfashionable Lady in the Potato Dress Again

Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 15, 2019
Messages
1,457
Mind fuckery is such a piss poor crutch. It truely is the calling card of a trash authors everywhere. It really should have remained the plot device of cheep con artists and the anti-heroes of bad hentai and porn novels.

Then again this isn't really an A list manga either so...
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Feb 18, 2023
Messages
926
Mind fuckery is such a piss poor crutch.

Finally, someone who has the same thoughts as me. It's like replacing Prof. Moriarty's skill and cleverness with magic voodoo nonsense. Because authors are incapable of writing characters cleverer than themselves.

Authors need to learn we don't mind the plot developments. What we despise terrible worldbuilding to get there.

Another one is "bad guy mysteriously escaping". Where despite evil monsters lurking around every corner, or nation's best knights hunting them down -- somehow "for plot" the villains pull a Houdini disappearing act. Without the necessary investment of resources, time, or any loss whatsoever.

Extracting a VIP from a warzone takes millions: trained special operations forces, military resources, logistic, planning, etc. But when a bad guy needs to be recycled by author? Poof. No escort needed. Teleports directly to destination.

Good metric is to reverse the protagonist/antagonist. And ask yourself if the story would be a Mary Sue/Gary Stu at that point.
 
Last edited:
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Dec 7, 2018
Messages
102
Can’t wait to see the bodyguard take that thot back regardless of the murder attempt and the fact that she willingly left him. No consequences incoming. :pacman:
 
Group Leader
Joined
Jan 8, 2023
Messages
19
Mantyap, terima kasih translation ny bang semoga masih dilanjut kan :meguupog:
 
Aggregator gang
Joined
Aug 13, 2023
Messages
77
Literal plot armor lmao
You should have a bad bruise after this similar to when someone shoots you while wearing a bulletproof vest. The bullet does not go through a bulletproof vest but it's like getting hit with a hammer, not fun.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Sep 6, 2019
Messages
1,117
You should have a bad bruise after this similar to when someone shoots you while wearing a bulletproof vest. The bullet does not go through a bulletproof vest but it's like getting hit with a hammer, not fun.
I would believe you if both of them got knocked back or something but the knife just stopped like that.
The momentum wasn't enough to even cause any pain
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
May 13, 2023
Messages
1,862
Let me guess it's going to be swept under the rug.. 😐

Unless she's under mind-control she totally deserves punishment, especially when she left Torren who's literally a "gentle giant" for that wannabe Robin Hood, the only thing he steals being woman of men and in the end giving to himself 😶
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 18, 2018
Messages
18,144
Turns out it's Nazel who needs a bodyguard, not Agnes. Dude has got very little combat skills and sense. He even turned his back to the huge bear monster to have a chat with Connie. It's no surprise he would let a suspicious person so close to himself, with no sign of being prepared for any surprises. Truly a man fit for peaceful office work.
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top