While I am absolutely going to read the serialization, if I can be honest, I kinda get the feeling that this story lost something. Maybe it was just my misinterpretation of the author's intent, but going from the title to the story, I kind of felt that Tsuyu in the pre-serialization was a quiet but resolute girl, one who may not be overly open with others, but doesn't reject or push them away. So far, though, the serialization just seems to portray her as overwhelming shy. In both, obviously, Tsuyu likes Chie's big brother. While in the pre-serialization she would find ways to spend time with him whenever and wherever she could through her own volition, in the serialization, it feels more as if Chie is the one behind everything between them, following a more stereotypical "shy girl needs constant pushing" type trope. Again, maybe I was reading something into the characters that the author didn't intend, but I was really liking it.