i can see why this can be annoying to translate with Yae's old way of talking kind of jumbles things a lot.
As for the general pacing of this medium, i cant say i like this over the light novel but is still cute none the less, after all the anime also had its issues. Mostly because they completely took out Touya's internal monologue which made the situation hilarious in the light novel. Without it, the story just becomes a generic isekai with the MC doing OP things without much forethought ;P.