YO HOLY SHIT THIS CHICK S N A P P E D. I love it when FLs in shoujo manga say dialogues which hits the spot ngl. It's annoying when they say less hard-hitting, soft shit when they snap. I fucking loved this.
I believe I found a small mistake in the translation on page 54: "Manga house" is likely from 漫画家, which actually refers to someone who draws manga for a living.