Is she making fun of me? - Ch. 2 - Pew pew

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"....It's actually kina looks fun" (Page 6)
This sentence sounds off, it should probably be something like:
"It actually looks kinda fun"

Thank you for the chapter.
 
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Note :The funny thing is, the idea behind the chapter was for the protagonist to do something dorky to show she’s harmless and not scary—but it seemed to work more on the readers than the characters in the story. Because This chapter got a lot of “this is funny” or “this is cute” comments, while the first one got reactions like “this is scary and creepy.
 

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