Is She Making Fun of Me? - Ch. 5 - ADRENALINE

[MangaDex]

 

[NawarDagher]

I’d really like to hear your opinions after reading this chapter



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[EchoGirl]

neat, longer chapters/pages

maybe make the 'thinking' bubbles a bit more distinct? if not change the words to italicized when it's a thought or so but just my opnion

lol cool altho i wonder how good adrenaline is , i think even if it helped me do a couple laps in like a gym class it wouldn't sharpen/improve my senses enough to be better at sports but good that she's pumped up, i half expected her to crash out and punch her or something

cool piano theme

 

[Tillman12]

attack mode layla??? I was NOT ready for that.


Mia was amazing this chapter too. She just quietly moved everything into place like a ghost controlling the flow of events. Their dynamic is getting really interesting.


Honestly this is starting to feel like monster x monster yuri and I’m 100% here for it. Layla and Mia’s energy is so chaotic but somehow perfect. I can’t wait to see where this goes.


And wow the one tiper with a 300$ donation saying he just want the yuri , not all heroes wear capes

 

[NawarDagher]

neat, longer chapters/pages

maybe make the 'thinking' bubbles a bit more distinct? if not change the words to italicized when it's a thought or so but just my opnion

lol cool altho i wonder how good adrenaline is , i think even if it helped me do a couple laps in like a gym class it wouldn't sharpen/improve my senses enough to be better at sports but good that she's pumped up, i half expected her to crash out and punch her or something

cool piano theme

Glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback on the thought bubbles — I’ll definitely think about that.


Also, the adrenaline isn’t supposed to suddenly make Layla good at sports (maybe she already is). It’s just meant to make her forget her anxiety and get excited

 

[EchoGirl]

Glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback on the thought bubbles — I’ll definitely think about that.


Also, the adrenaline isn’t supposed to suddenly make Layla good at sports (maybe she already is). It’s just meant to make her forget her anxiety and get excited

lol yeah nothing wrong with more confidence but hope she doesn't cringe too much at herself once it wears off

Kinda reminds me of mikorin minus the flirting

https://tenor.com/bS4AO.gif

 

[xanon]

Nice to see that Layla has admirers other than Mia and Alva.

 

[Yuri_Enjoyer_Deluxe]

Got caught lacking once, hits the MJ: It became personal with her.

You go girl! Score a goal in her heart 🦅

 

[NawarDagher]

Soo

Nice to see that Layla has admirers other than Mia and Alva.

sorry but who are you referring to ?

 

[NawarDagher]

Got caught lacking once, hits the MJ: It became personal with her.

You go girl! Score a goal in her heart 🦅

It’s more like Layla got excited, not embarrassed or took things personally. I mean, Layla gets embarrassed all the time. But this time, she saw how Mia was playing , and that got her blood pumping

 

[TheGROAT]

Glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback on the thought bubbles — I’ll definitely think about that.


Also, the adrenaline isn’t supposed to suddenly make Layla good at sports (maybe she already is). It’s just meant to make her forget her anxiety and get excited

She needed to try stay in the middle of the road when they were running to try and not stand out. No signs of noteworthy exhaustion, so she probably could have lead the pack if she wanted.

 

[NawarDagher]

She needed to try stay in the middle of the road when they were running to try and not stand out. No signs of noteworthy exhaustion, so she probably could have lead the pack if she wanted.

That’s right — good observation. That was my intention. But there’s also the angle that the others weren’t taking the class seriously, except for Mia

 

[xanon]

Soo

sorry but who are you referring to ?

Tenda, right? She comments how she likes Layla's hair. More admiration than infatuation, but that's good that Layla has more defenders than she thinks.

 

[NeverAnother]

There’s something so engaging about these characters, honestly each chapter has me more and more intrigued about how things will progress. I am also a fan of having parallel conversations happening in a single panel, though I know that can be a struggle in terms of sentence length and bubble real-estate. Thank you for the chapter!

 

[iamalvez]

That lwk scared me, I was only expecting an ansiety attack

 

[HelioCesar]

Even she is saying the thing!