Iseikai Tensei

Member
Joined
Apr 24, 2024
Messages
57
was far better than i was expecting it to be, but i gotta be honest they blew their load about the twist way to early

The reveal of it being earth and that eve was the one to destroy the world should of been saved for the first meeting with the pope, while it was obviouse before it was revealed it i feel it would of had a bigger impact if it was revealed fully to the MC and the reader if it was revealed during the talk with hte pope
 
Banned
Joined
Jan 3, 2019
Messages
6,565
Decent start but gets below average after the "twist" reveal and gets worse from there.
 
Joined
Dec 12, 2024
Messages
5
...it feels like I watched a youtube recap of a manga instead of reading from start to finish.

Everything just went by at a break neck pace.
 
Member
Joined
Mar 6, 2019
Messages
72
I like it at the beginning...

But the rest little bit to rush...

The author should explore more about heroes artifacts first... And reveal the memories alongside with it... thus the journey to collect more artifacts and reveal truth of the world...

such weste...

The world building almost perfect if only author did rush the story
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top