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I wholeheartedly concur. In the beginning I thought, that chapter actually turns the story around. "We just tested something out", seemed like an asspull, but I liked the result. They suddenly could fight again! Maybe the author read some critics on some japanese webpages (the flawes of the last few chapters have been universally obvious) and took them to heart? Or maybe the editor changed? Whatever, the quality of that fight was clearly above the trashy last few chapters....PSYCHE!!! Defeated offscreen by that asshole.@Flyingpantsu:The wind spirit wasn't a bad guy and the poor writing has been confirmed. What was the point of having our two heroines prove they can win by themselves only to transform them into damsels in distress in the next panel ? It would have been good if they did the saving instead of Taichi but no, we're being fed a cliché development.
Everything that was accomplished during this chapter has been reduced to naught at the end of it so it was totally pointless. Good job, author.
This is the polar opposite of that "we need a strong female main character", even if she becomes a merry sue and the writing gets bad, that some movie franchises became a victim of. In this manga's case the writing gets bad, because, "We need that guy to save those chics. I don't care if they are strong." You just want to punch whoever is responsible for this, in either case.
Now really. I enjoyed the first part quite a bit. And I believe this manga had some quite decent written chapters before. So the author is capable of at least decent writing. Is he flaunting this fact into our faces with this chapter and wants to show us, that he isn't doing it on purpose, for what reason ever? (Help! My editor forces me to write BS!)