Isekai Healthy Kitchen - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Draco the God and the Asayama Siblings

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Meh. The dragon getting bullied so hard took me out of it. I could skip this chapter and enjoy the story more.
 
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I love that the lil sis was like DON'T IGNORE ME.
She's great.
 
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I could've done without ever seeing this chapter. The way they started it made it a bit mysterious how they ended up in another world and started a restaurant. Then slowly drip feed how they arrived and what happened.

But God and skills shenanigans again.
 
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And this is how you write a sister character. Bubbly, high strung and supportive all the way
 
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That sister was like you gotta take me my brother is a 100% home grown japanese cuck boy, he couldn't do anything other then what I allow him to do.
 
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This chapter doesn't work as chapter 2. We already knew Momoka would be joining so all the stuff about her not going to the other world aswell was unneeded.
This would've worked if a) this was chapter 1, b) chapter 1 didn't show Momoka or c) this were an origin story in a later chapter, ch.10+ or something.

Touya is just as much of a pushover MC who lets basically every other person steamroll over him as almost any other Isekai MC...
 

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