Isekai Kara Kita Elf to Tomo ni Sugosu Nichijou - Ch. 1

[nerudo]

The manga seems enjoyable. The lack of proper English in the translation makes this too unbearable. There are far too many grammatical and syntactic errors. Maybe if this gets some proofreading and corrections then I might be able to read this. Thanks for trying at least.

Would it be possible to give an example of a grammatical error? It's kind of a shock to me to know that it's full of grammatical errors. If anyone is willing to proofread it, please PM me, and I'll upload a revised chapter as soon as possible.
edit:
omg. Now I can see it. I updated a few pages, but I won't be able to revise everything now. What the hell was I doing? I was sleep-deprived and didn't read through all the pages for a second time.

 

[MewOne]

Tfw no blonde beautiful elf confessing to me after I wake up

 

[Beinmote9z]

Looks mid af,

Anyways off to chapter 2

 

[Lvl30LoliLewder]

nothing about this seems worth its rating. must be the erofu lovers inflating the numbers again.

 

[Coldlight]

It's one of those "sudden exotic GF falls from the sky" reverse isekai stories. Nothing special (I do like the character designs). But to think they actually became lovers quickly and there's none of that "will they won't they" song and dance that's plagued male-oriented romcoms for a long time. That at least is very promising: they're already dating from chapter 1. No more of the usual waffling about confessions and the like. So I will expect them to act like lovers.

From her perspective, she had just finished a very important duty to her world/people and now it seems this time she has decided to live her own life for herself, as she sees fit. But by choosing to fall in love with a human she's setting herself up for lifespan-related heartbreak... She does say she's immature so maybe she's still a young elf by elven standards? Maybe she hasn't actually thought about that heavy stuff yet.

Mildly interesting how there are other elves already (secretly) living in his world. Some of them seem to have reverse isekai'd themselves long before our female lead teleported into this world.

 

[VooXoo]

Very fast developmeent, evn too much.
But it could turn up to have a twist, elf said that she acted for the tree and her feelings were suppressed, but she even said MC world doesn't have a world tree and was surprised of hearing elves could live without one, isn't logical to think the effect of the tree on her got lifted? I think that is the case and what she feels for MC is exactly what he said, a surge of emotions for their unique meeting, added to him treating her with kindness, she "imprinted" on him as the first humanoid after her emptions returned.

 

[irem01]

I mean that at least seems kinda reasonable, if a person is the first person to make you feel emotions then I guess you would at least have some affinity or affection for them