Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Sep 10, 2018
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@Denker-Bosu I seriously have to explain to you manually that concepts such as panelwork, narrative flow, enemy and environmental design, personal agency for side characters, depiction of momentum, character growth, lore, engagement of dialogue, contrast and more exist and how each specifically is lacking and in which way? Fuck that. It's all blatant enough to qualify as truisms from where I'm standing and you're either being needlessly obstinate or utterly autistic if you're gonna claim it isn't self-evident how lacking in effort this manga is in most any given area. Don't admit how right I am if you're that triggered by the idea of being wrong and call it a win for all I care. I'm sure it won't feel hollow in any way.
Shit, you're even being obstinate about how utterly obvious it is that the dog girl cardboard cutout is designed purely to be the blandest onahole possible with nothing approaching the hopes and fears a real person (or even a somewhat retarded dog) would have... And you're even claiming the MC is something more than a hollow façade for readers to project themselves onto, holy shit!
I'd rather scrape off my eyeballs with an ice cream scoop than engage in the type of blatantly responsibility-shirking attempts at narrative-shifting rhetoric you seem to have found yourself forced to resort to, making yourself about as worthy of having anything discussed with as a rock with a poorly-drawn face on it. Well done on establishing your lofty standards that might as well be "food scavenged from the sewers is a luxury I'm not worthy of".
Oh, and the fact that you don't hate yourself for reading this merely implies an alarming lack of self-reflection on your part and is not at all a good thing, and neither is being really confident in the stupid, stupid shit you've unabashedly written so far. You having gone this far to defend this huge a pile of shit actually implies that said lack of self-reflection is probably advanced to a pathological degree and you should get help.
I see that you at least had the subconscious self-awareness to stuff it with the cringe-inducing ALL CAPS BOLD PRINT though, so good job with the progress!
Have a nice day.
Shit, you're even being obstinate about how utterly obvious it is that the dog girl cardboard cutout is designed purely to be the blandest onahole possible with nothing approaching the hopes and fears a real person (or even a somewhat retarded dog) would have... And you're even claiming the MC is something more than a hollow façade for readers to project themselves onto, holy shit!
I'd rather scrape off my eyeballs with an ice cream scoop than engage in the type of blatantly responsibility-shirking attempts at narrative-shifting rhetoric you seem to have found yourself forced to resort to, making yourself about as worthy of having anything discussed with as a rock with a poorly-drawn face on it. Well done on establishing your lofty standards that might as well be "food scavenged from the sewers is a luxury I'm not worthy of".
Oh, and the fact that you don't hate yourself for reading this merely implies an alarming lack of self-reflection on your part and is not at all a good thing, and neither is being really confident in the stupid, stupid shit you've unabashedly written so far. You having gone this far to defend this huge a pile of shit actually implies that said lack of self-reflection is probably advanced to a pathological degree and you should get help.
I see that you at least had the subconscious self-awareness to stuff it with the cringe-inducing ALL CAPS BOLD PRINT though, so good job with the progress!
Have a nice day.
