Isekai Nonbiri Nouka - Vol. 1 Ch. 15 - New Resident, New Water System, And New Bathhouse

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MC is like "I wish they would be more modest around me" like dude youve literally been sexing multiple women everynight including tyese girls.... why would you be anti nudity with them....
 
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Lol'd at the queen bee having a literal crown.
Also, that's not how a beehive works, unless you want to fully destroy it to get the honey inside.
 
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Lol'd at the queen bee having a literal crown.
Also, that's not how a beehive works, unless you want to fully destroy it to get the honey inside.
None of this is how anything works. It's almost as if the author did no research at all and has never set foot in a workshop (or even outdoors) in his life.
 
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"Sadly" this mf says. Dang it must be depressing having to bang an increasing number of supernaturally hot women. 👀
 
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None of this is how anything works. It's almost as if the author did no research at all and has never set foot in a workshop (or even outdoors) in his life.
it almost as if...this is a fictional world...DAMM!!! you got it!!!
seriously every monster is intelligent, the bee probably make a place where it honey can be give out.

you know use your imagination to fill up the void in story, that author didn't have to spell it out. like how you reading a normal ass book.

thank to people like you, half the novel in existant is fill with author that keep explaning shit.
"so the MC is search for item,you see in this world there is this website call modern-fantasy-google. and so the MC manage to find his goal item by searching "item" on modern-fantasy-google"
and no i didn't lie, shit like this exist cause moron keep asking stupid question.
 
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it almost as if...this is a fictional world...DAMM!!! you got it!!!
seriously every monster is intelligent, the bee probably make a place where it honey can be give out.

you know use your imagination to fill up the void in story, that author didn't have to spell it out. like how you reading a normal ass book.

thank to people like you, half the novel in existant is fill with author that keep explaning shit.
"so the MC is search for item,you see in this world there is this website call modern-fantasy-google. and so the MC manage to find his goal item by searching "item" on modern-fantasy-google"
and no i didn't lie, shit like this exist cause moron keep asking stupid question.
I don't have any issue with the fantasy elements. It's all the normal things that are just plain wrong that I dislike.

This is a survival/homesteading manga. You'd expect the author to actually know a bit about the subject, but nope. He has no idea how wood works, no idea how earthen structures work, no idea how stone tools work, no idea how salt beds work, etc. Modern objects just miraculously appear instead of homemade items appropriate to the setting. It's very apparent that the author did no research at all. I could accept that if this was just a generic fantasy manga, but homesteading is the entire point of the manga!

You know the manga where the guy has Minecraft powers? It's great! Totally unrealistic, but that's the entire point. I have no problem with that whatsoever.

I never said I wanted detailed explanations of everything. I want a sensible setting. So fuck off with your "it's fiction" bullshit. It's bad writing.
 
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Modern objects
wait what which one, are you sure it not just manga fuck up and you just chalk it all up as a writing problem
" homesteading is the entire point of the manga!"

yeah that wrong, it just slow life ridicurousness that is selling point of this manga, that just your problem.
You'd expect the author to actually know a bit about the subject
not everyone can pull achitecture reincarnation.

"It's very apparent that the author did no research at all. I could accept that if this was just a generic fantasy manga"

bruh if this shit is generic fantasy manga, i be piss. your standard is weird bruh.

"You know the manga where the guy has Minecraft powers? It's great! Totally unrealistic, but that's the entire point. I have no problem with that whatsoever"
And you chose to have a problem in manga where dude got bless by THE GOD personally himself? and the story never clainm to be realistic at all. god stright up give him immortal body and god tool.

I never said I wanted detailed explanations of everything
to be fair this part is refer to the guy you reply to. dude asking how capet appear, despite story just explain that it a soft dirt.

"I want a sensible setting. So fuck off with your "it's fiction" bullshit. It's bad writing."
author sell it as shitty non-serious slow life, and they sell it in a way that is sensible to me
did you go to mcdonal and start to throw a tartum that they didn't sell streak that going to suit your elite palate?

and it sensible enough so fuck off with your whiny complain about BAD WRITING. at least without explain shit
no idea how earthen structures work, no idea how stone tools work, no idea how salt beds work
like what the fuck are you on about? salt bed? it a fucking fantasy world shit just exist werid,EVEN MC go"wait is it?".
and seriously what the hell you mean earthen structure work. i never notice it.
seriously, author sell it as shitty non-serious slow life, and they sell it as they delivery. and you just keep picking stuff that no body give a shit and said it a BAD WRITNG BAD WRITING. Who give a fuck.
you know what a bad writng? it author sell it as slow life story then put it unstopable rapist 2000 and waste your god dam time reading a sob story, that what it is.
don't fucking buy wrong stuff without checking and complain with your buyer remose on your hand.
like sure if author just use barebone and wrong explain for how everything work, then said that MC conquer the world with "WRONG" stone tool or earthen structures then, i be agree with you. but it were never the focus. as i said this shit isn't
achitecture reincarnation. it just MC stumble upon random stuff, make random stuff and random people shinanegang.

seriously, i consider this story to be if anything, good writing for it expectation. MC is wrong all the time and there are time where he got wrong explanation by people before being correct by someone. author never clarify anything that happen. just let it stew on till MC just sensible either meet someone that correct him or asking someone about it.

TLDR:just to be clear, YOU DIDN'T point out bad writing. YOU COMPLAIN about wanting BEST writing so shut you ass up and read something else.
everything you said didn't contribute to the selling point of this story at all, you didn't want Better isekai nonbiri. you want less bad story in your eye.
homesteading is the entire point of the manga
seriously where do you get that, when at some point the story is just MC kid fuck around in demon kingdom capital. you absolutely got wrong idea about this story.
 
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wait what which one, are you sure it not just manga fuck up and you just chalk it all up as a writing problem
" homesteading is the entire point of the manga!"

yeah that wrong, it just slow life ridicurousness that is selling point of this manga, that just your problem.
Have you read this manga at all? It's all about the guy building a farm! If that's not homesteading, then what the hell is it?
not everyone can pull achitecture reincarnation.

"It's very apparent that the author did no research at all. I could accept that if this was just a generic fantasy manga"

bruh if this shit is generic fantasy manga, i be piss. your standard is weird bruh.
You should work on your reading comprehension. I could accept poor research in a generic fantasy manga. This isn't a generic fantasy manga, it's a survival/homesteading manga. If the author can't pull that off, they shouldn't attempt it in the first place.
And you chose to have a problem in manga where dude got bless by THE GOD personally himself? and the story never clainm to be realistic at all. god stright up give him immortal body and god tool.
Some amount of realism is expected in this genre. I have no problem with the idea that a god gave the dude a magic tool, because that's the fantasy element. I have a problem with the non-fantasy parts.
author sell it as shitty non-serious slow life, and they sell it in a way that is sensible to me
did you go to mcdonal and start to throw a tartum that they didn't sell streak that going to suit your elite palate?
It's not a slow life. Slow life doesn't focus on the mechanics of how the characters interact with the world. This manga does focus on the mechanics, and gets them wrong every time.
and it sensible enough so fuck off with your whiny complain about BAD WRITING. at least without explain shit

like what the fuck are you on about? salt bed? it a fucking fantasy world shit just exist werid,EVEN MC go"wait is it?".
and seriously what the hell you mean earthen structure work. i never notice it.
That says a lot more about you than it does about the manga. Perhaps you should focus on your education more. Hydrology is a thing, the author chose to include it, the author got it wrong, and you didn't notice because you don't understand hydrology.

How is that my problem?
seriously, author sell it as shitty non-serious slow life, and they sell it as they delivery. and you just keep picking stuff that no body give a shit and said it a BAD WRITNG BAD WRITING. Who give a fuck.
Me and the guy I was replying to originally, for starters.
you know what a bad writng? it author sell it as slow life story then put it unstopable rapist 2000 and waste your god dam time reading a sob story, that what it is.
Bad writing comes in many forms.
don't fucking buy wrong stuff without checking and complain with your buyer remose on your hand.
like sure if author just use barebone and wrong explain for how everything work, then said that MC conquer the world with "WRONG" stone tool or earthen structures then, i be agree with you. but it were never the focus. as i said this shit isn't
achitecture reincarnation. it just MC stumble upon random stuff, make random stuff and random people shinanegang.
And that's where you're wrong. Well, one of the many places you're wrong, anyway.

Look back at all the chapters leading up to this. How much time does it spend on him building, planting, making stuff, etc.? Way more than what you get in a generic slow life manga.
seriously, i consider this story to be if anything, good writing for it expectation. MC is wrong all the time and there are time where he got wrong explanation by people before being correct by someone. author never clarify anything that happen. just let it stew on till MC just sensible either meet someone that correct him or asking someone about it.
Then I'm sorry to inform you, but you have shit taste.
TLDR:just to be clear, YOU DIDN'T point out bad writing. YOU COMPLAIN about wanting BEST writing so shut you ass up and read something else.
everything you said didn't contribute to the selling point of this story at all, you didn't want Better isekai nonbiri. you want less bad story in your eye.

seriously where do you get that, when at some point the story is just MC kid fuck around in demon kingdom capital. you absolutely got wrong idea about this story.
Given your complete inability to write coherent English, I'd say you wouldn't know bad writing if it bit off your leg.

And while I'm here, let me let you in on a little secret. Well, it's not really a secret, since you're the only person who doesn't know:

The forum is where people discuss the manga.

This is where we go to talk about our impressions of what we read. I, and the person I originally replied to, think the manga is lacking. You apparently don't. And that's fine. People are allowed to have different opinions.

If you have counterpoints, then by all means post them. Discussion is what this area is all about. But if you want to come in here and start throwing insults, don't be surprised when you get them back in return. I'd recommend against it, however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
 
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Have you read this manga at all? It's all about the guy building a farm! If that's not homesteading, then what the hell is it?



Given your complete inability to write coherent English, I'd say you wouldn't know bad writing if it bit off your leg.
bruh have you read this at all? or just complaining after reading like part of story. and english isn't my native languge, jackass
seriously, i consider this story to be if anything, good writing for it expectation. MC is wrong all the time and there are time where he got wrong explanation by people before being correct by someone. author never clarify anything that happen. just let it stew on till MC just sensible either meet someone that correct him or asking someone about it.
Then I'm sorry to inform you, but you have shit taste.
did not colerate at all. but sure.
but you have shit taste.
and you come here to a Mcdonal to demand a luxery steak. i enjoy shit thing that isn't stupid.
This is where we go to talk about our impressions of what we read. I, and the person I originally replied to, think the manga is lacking. You apparently don't. And that's fine. People are allowed to have different opinions.
when your opinion is that mcdonal isn't cater to your specific interest, i can point out how worthless it is
throwing insults
that fair, i just got annoy from author writing story and keep explain bullshit that doesn't and find stupid complain to be result of that, so i took it out on you sorry about that.

don't be surprised when you get them back in return.
i surprised?
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
yeah that it. you are redditor moron there is no argument here.
I, and the person I originally replied to, think the manga is lacking. + long ass personal opinion
yeah that just you and that person being wrong. sure can this manga be better? absolutely! but what you said add nothing to it.

Some amount of realism is expected in this genre. I have no problem with the idea that a god gave the dude a magic tool, because that's the fantasy element. I have a problem with the non-fantasy parts.
you don't come asking realism when the first EP start with MC plow though forest, what you need in manga is sensible.
It's not a slow life. Slow life doesn't focus on the mechanics of how the characters interact with the world. This manga does focus on the mechanics, and gets them wrong every time.
Have you read this manga at all? It's all about the guy building a farm! If that's not homesteading, then what the hell is it?
a fucking slow-life farming is the name of story, i am so sorry for being rude and crass i really do, but i can't when you are being so stupid.
It's all about the guy building a farm! If that's not homesteading, then what the hell is it?
i read the novel and this shit went past homesteading long time ago. the story have MC children fuck around in school. a bunch of dragon crash a festival. a parade that recreate long history of the world.
i am sorry but earthen work being realistic isn't going to add anything to this story, other than get your rock off, base on how much you focus on it.
and seriously
How is that my problem?
cause out of million people reading manga and novel, few people like you seem have problem of "demaning bull shit" and you specificly seem to jerk off to earthen hydro-who give a fuck.
Perhaps you should focus on your education more. Hydrology is a thing, the author chose to include it, the author got it wrong, and you didn't notice because you don't understand hydrology.
Perhaps you should realize that you are a weirdo and only you notice this "problem(if it ever is)" and people would be more appreative of you explain instead of just whine and whine and whine. cause this a first time i see someone complain about a fucking hydrology and earthern work in any story if at all.
and serious, depend on how wrong author is, it may just be you problem that nitpick something and delude yourself into being right.

seriously, i whine about story, i critizie it ok? but i critisize it base on the premise. if story try tell a love life between MC and viliansese then it jsut shove meaning less drama 20 chapter in, i be complain.
you here on ep 15 talk about earthern ware and modern tool bullshit. and to this point, still didn't explain what it about.
You should work on your reading comprehension. I could accept poor research in a generic fantasy manga. This isn't a generic fantasy manga, it's a survival/homesteading manga. If the author can't pull that off, they shouldn't attempt it in the first place.
AND this is your stupidest sentence. a masterwork of stupid
You should work on your reading comprehension.
said a person that never clarify what his earthen and hydrology is about other than "i said so" who decide that this story biggest problem is unrealistic water way.
I could accept poor research in a generic fantasy manga. This isn't a generic fantasy manga
it's a survival/homesteading manga
and this is stupidest of the stupidest.
not going to say you have reading comprehension problem.
you have comprehension problem.
seriously who told you that? you? so you make judgement yourself what is impotant and what not? it moronic.

This isn't a generic fantasy manga
Manga name "A FUCKING SLOW FARMING LIFE"
it's a survival/homesteading manga
DUDE GOT A DOG A CHEAT A WIFE ENTIRE FREAKING VILAGE AND A DEMON KINGDOM
survival/homesteading manga
WHO?WHAT?WHY? again are you sure, you reading the manga?

ME,I, REFERNECE TO MYSELF. read web novel and light novel. i know this story biggest selling point. and a freaking detail and realistic water way ain't one of them chief.
I could accept poor research in a generic fantasy manga.
said the guy that say i have a shit taste. i can't believe it.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
yeah actually i can belive someone that said shit like this to be so wrong.
 
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you going to have your mind explod if you have reading comphension, read novel and realize , this shit ain't survival/homesteading manga at all
 
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bruh have you read this at all? or just complaining after reading like part of story. and english isn't my native languge, jackass


did not colerate at all. but sure.

and you come here to a Mcdonal to demand a luxery steak. i enjoy shit thing that isn't stupid.

when your opinion is that mcdonal isn't cater to your specific interest, i can point out how worthless it is

that fair, i just got annoy from author writing story and keep explain bullshit that doesn't and find stupid complain to be result of that, so i took it out on you sorry about that.


i surprised?

yeah that it. you are redditor moron there is no argument here.

yeah that just you and that person being wrong. sure can this manga be better? absolutely! but what you said add nothing to it.


you don't come asking realism when the first EP start with MC plow though forest, what you need in manga is sensible.

a fucking slow-life farming is the name of story, i am so sorry for being rude and crass i really do, but i can't when you are being so stupid.

i read the novel and this shit went past homesteading long time ago. the story have MC children fuck around in school. a bunch of dragon crash a festival. a parade that recreate long history of the world.
i am sorry but earthen work being realistic isn't going to add anything to this story, other than get your rock off, base on how much you focus on it.
and seriously

cause out of million people reading manga and novel, few people like you seem have problem of "demaning bull shit" and you specificly seem to jerk off to earthen hydro-who give a fuck.

Perhaps you should realize that you are a weirdo and only you notice this "problem(if it ever is)" and people would be more appreative of you explain instead of just whine and whine and whine. cause this a first time i see someone complain about a fucking hydrology and earthern work in any story if at all.
and serious, depend on how wrong author is, it may just be you problem that nitpick something and delude yourself into being right.

seriously, i whine about story, i critizie it ok? but i critisize it base on the premise. if story try tell a love life between MC and viliansese then it jsut shove meaning less drama 20 chapter in, i be complain.
you here on ep 15 talk about earthern ware and modern tool bullshit. and to this point, still didn't explain what it about.

AND this is your stupidest sentence. a masterwork of stupid

said a person that never clarify what his earthen and hydrology is about other than "i said so" who decide that this story biggest problem is unrealistic water way.

and this is stupidest of the stupidest.
not going to say you have reading comprehension problem.
you have comprehension problem.
seriously who told you that? you? so you make judgement yourself what is impotant and what not? it moronic.


Manga name "A FUCKING SLOW FARMING LIFE"

DUDE GOT A DOG A CHEAT A WIFE ENTIRE FREAKING VILAGE AND A DEMON KINGDOM

WHO?WHAT?WHY? again are you sure, you reading the manga?

ME,I, REFERNECE TO MYSELF. read web novel and light novel. i know this story biggest selling point. and a freaking detail and realistic water way ain't one of them chief.

said the guy that say i have a shit taste. i can't believe it.

yeah actually i can belive someone that said shit like this to be so wrong.
Yeah, there's no point in continuing this. You're just repeating the same shit, and I'm not going to continue to argue with an idiot.
 
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Yeah, there's no point in continuing this. You're just repeating the same shit, and I'm not going to continue to argue with an idiot.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
however. It's hard to engage in a battle of wits when you're unarmed.
when you are about to write a chill fun novel about slow life.
but a realitic earthen jerk-off said "i did not consent"
 

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