Isekai Ten’i-sha no My Pace Kouryaku-ki - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Grosse Hendler

[Bevinsky]

This is either machine translated without any kind of editing or a bad April Fools joke. What the hell.

 

[Blackbird]

Whit this

 

[athros]

The scans and typesetting are good and neat... but you need better TL/MTL result, or at least a very good proofreader to stitch it all into coherent dialogues. Still understandable, but at few points it made me "uh, what?".

 

[Milanin]

... It's a painful read to say the least...

Edit... Is Sarah Irish? "Is mi work"

 

[riannon]

I'd hate to complain, but I can barely understand. Thanks for the chapter anyway

 

[Tanskandoggi]

Could do with an edit or two

 

[TheOne320]

His name should be "Großhändler" which is German for wholesale merchant.

 

[LysandersTreason]

what the absolute fuck, what language is this?

This is beyond a bad translation, many of these words are not words in english at all

 

[feha]

I was thinking it were merely a really bad translation, then I saw that they translated "bow" as "arc"... This is a troll tl, isnt it?

 

[chemy1347]

"I will protect my master. The next one."

Either she's saying "Who's next?" or she's saying "I won't protect this master, but I'll protect my next master."

I know I'm getting this for free, but I'll always remember Revelion scans for negative reasons. Scanlation is clean, but the translation is very poor. I thought this was an individual translator in which case fair enough, but this was by a team?

 

[loyalviewer55]

Chapter 2 has a MUCH BETTER TRANSLATION... Give it a chance to get better.

 

[theldras]

Chapter 1 = majority of the "translation" cant even pass as a language.
Chapter 2 = although there is room for improvement, it is very much so English and very much so actually makes sense.

i don't think i have EVER seen any scan group make such huge progress in translation quality over such a short period of time.
my advice to you Revelion Scans is to revisit chapter 1 and redo it as the poor translation turns away readers and it serves to give your translation quality a very bad rep even thou you (seemingly) have fixed the issue.

 

[Wolvenworks]

Oh wow...that read about as smooth as sandpaper. Hope this gets reworked at a later date

 

[LivelyHavoc]

i want to read this chapter but its playing hell with my dyslexia, please redo if possible.

 

[deathmailrock]

"You have no common sense" says stupid MC that won't get into the bath with a sexy woman willing to get into the bath with him...???

 

[AAASSS1]

So much engrish

 

[blockshift758]

mmm yes this is translated character by character

 

[calliberjoe]

nigga just pulls out an mp7 out of no where