Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Mar 6, 2020
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The problem isn’t that this is generic trash isekai. The problem is there’s no stakes. MC is bland and beta, sure but he doesn’t form any connection. He isn’t interesting. He has no struggles. His relationships with supporting characters fall flat. There’s nothing here to hook your interests into.
Mushoku Tensei, Arifureta, the better isekai all have stories that make the MC compelling. Even if the character WAS and asshole in his previous life, or went through hell in the new world, they hook you in. A protagonist needs a journey with tension and genuine threat of loss to make you interested.
Thats where so many of these trash isekai stories fall flat. They don’t do a damn thing to make you care.
Theres a framework here for a good story and the writer has done their best to avoid anything tense or interesting. I wouldn’t waste time on this. 1/10
Mushoku Tensei, Arifureta, the better isekai all have stories that make the MC compelling. Even if the character WAS and asshole in his previous life, or went through hell in the new world, they hook you in. A protagonist needs a journey with tension and genuine threat of loss to make you interested.
Thats where so many of these trash isekai stories fall flat. They don’t do a damn thing to make you care.
Theres a framework here for a good story and the writer has done their best to avoid anything tense or interesting. I wouldn’t waste time on this. 1/10
