Isekai Tensei no Boukensha - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - story.1

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I like the art. But the story’s pace is far too rushed. Everything could have been split into 2 or 3 chapters of the same length and still feel out of pace.
 
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Up until now nothing makes sense.
>every stat S+
>loses to snakes
yes
cant understand what's going on without staring for 5 minutes because of the art.
I do like the fast plot movement, but shit that's really fast.
 
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I found this a bit incoherent. It wasn't completely impossible to follow, but I feel that the framing, pacing, and even the dialogue left things considerably less clear than they could have been.
 
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You know....dogs usually have at least 3 puppies each time they get pregnant, so where are the other ones?
 
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Am i the only one that think that the chapter looked as if it was skipping pages? Like it kept jumping from thing to another
 
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Just here to beat the dead horse. I can see that the author was ambigious in the artstyle, but ultimately its his composition and angle that does not mesh with this. I bet the author had one chance to go through with it and is trying to cram as much as many hooks as possible to garner interest. I don't really understand at times what I'm looking at and i read a lot of manga with different styles and never really mind if they're rough in general, but this time is was kind of rushed. Puzzled how the editor greenlit this tbh.
 
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Far too rushed, It just ruins it all for me when they don't take their time to build the world first and the characters.
 
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Oh, thank god everyone else had the same experience as me, I thought I was having a stroke.
 
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Instead of Chocobo Breeding, it was Fenrir Breeding.

Very tragic Fenrir Breeding.
 
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it's rushed a lot. not even gonna say 'it's A BIT rushed'.

but with all the isekais lately and seeing as this is the standard, i can understand the story.

will see if in the future chapter(when it starts to differ from other isekai) it will still be rushed or not.
 
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I'm already used to speedy isekai, sometimes it's too fast and sometimes it's just too slow X
 
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I hate myself seeing page 4 and a mellow Aimer song currently playing.
 
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Damn it. Why is it raining now.

Even the ninja is cutting onion somewhere deep in the mountain.
 
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I bet mangaka-san was high on mushrooms or something while drawing this...
 

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