The layout is bad and it's hard to tell who is talking in a conversation. The editor really needs to step it up and help the artist with direction otherwise it's just confusing.
@kaminomikan won't help much even if you did. This new evil guy is completely out of left field. The only thing I was able to understand is that these ill tempered bastards are upset because they heard that a big magical beast was in the area and came to hunt it, but that beast was most likely the parents of the puppy who are now dead, so there is no money to be made.