Izure Saikyou no Renkinjutsushi? - Ch. 18

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if there is any mistake or any issue in this chapter then let me know i will fix it. Give me your honest feedback on my translation skills. Thanks for your support.
Great work
Ya getting better with each chapter ya do. ❤️

Overall its real easy to read, the only point I might add. if possible don't split words, just move the whole word down a line in the text box to make it fit. An example being, absolutely, it splits a few times in this Tl try keep it as one not absolut
ely

^ it's an annoying word when it's split.
 
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I wanted to say this but I forgot. Where does Maria keep them bonkas donkas hidden?
 
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Every. Fucking. Time.
This stupid, lying bullshit:

MC: I come from a culture that despises sex, where all males must act terrified of mammary glands, and must fight as hard as possible to never have sex for our entire life!

Me: No, bruv; you're from Japan.

I mean... I've been there, and while I am sure that perhaps, oh... maybe 0.0000000001% of all males in that country may be like this? Maybe? If that? But, with that said... I am doubtful that 99.9999% of all Isekai Protags will have this much disgust, terror, and muppet-flailing incompetence when faced by a member of the opposite sex "en dishabille..."

It's just really shitty writing; it fails to be even marginally humorous, and just seems stupid as fuck.

And it is somehow an integral part of every fucking isekai?

You may think that every trope has a basis in reality, but this one Just. Fucking. Doesn't.
 
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Why the fuck was he surprised after seeing that Maria is suitable for combat? Mulan showed her to him after he asked her for someone who is able to fight, it would be strange if she didn't have any combat capabilities…
 

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