You really should have somebody proofread your translations.
It is painfully obvious that proofreading has been done.
Also, this MC stays as one of the stupidest, moronic, imbecilic, fucktards I've ever seen.
Fuck, he's dumb; just... so fucking stupid.
If I told him he was this stupid, he would thank me, and demand that I take a reward for it... while demanding I tell him that he's worthless.
I like the world, the concept, the plot... all of it!
But this MC is simply without any form of worth; the world would literally be better without his existence.