J<->M - Ch. 20 - It's The Korokoro Cleaners!

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okay, president clearly bodyswapped.
the plot is thickening way more than in hinamatsuri here
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @deft_tones
  • p5 They're saying it's a woman who went crazy and not J this time. -> They're saying this time it's a woman who went crazy and not J.
  • p5 Still not get it? -> Still don't get it?
  • p12 Course you're -> Of course you're
  • p12 not that short of a reckless person -> not such a reckless person
  • p26 ev-ery-one -> eve-ry-one
  • p26 Where is the president this time. -> Where is the president this time?
  • p30 regular client so please -> regular client, so please
  • p31 Ok~ay -> O~kay // Okay~
  • p34 he wanted to because -> he wanted to kill because [or some other edit]
  • p35 has he gotten if -> has he gotten, if
  • p35 on this target. -> on this target?
 

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