I don't have much for the hero being a pervert or his attitude...
but it came to me that it reeks too much of a work made by a 14-year-old's fantasies
I dunno how to say it better, but this manga is hollow, and too much edge...
wouldn't want to get into the art style but.. it's trying to be comedic with the expressions.. but it just doesn't seem to suit well for it.
If this was a 18+ doujin, it'd do fine.. but it's a serialized manga.
may do well for other people tho, but I'll have my cup of tea :<
G'luck, Sayonara~ :>