i don't get it, it's too late to take her to his apartment but not too late for a hotel ? makes no sense, unless the trains and busses have stopped running for the night, but you can always call a taxi so .... ???
@Kaede she already talks funny (saying "das" instead of "that") so there is no need for an ugly font for us to get that she is talking like a drunk person.
And i don't mean this as an insult, but that translation is kinda bad, try not to translate word for word, but what makes more sense and sounds better, for example "Oh...What happens?" should just say "What?" (...You don't wanna sit next to me?)
But i appreciate your efforts, we all do, we just hope you get better at it.