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What a god damn stupendous chapter. Holy hell.
In a long, long while, I haven't felt like: "This was a good chapter".
@feha
That's a good point, and it does put a good spin on the "Heroine". But honestly, did she ever act like she was thinking about anyone but herself? In-game, the captured-target endings were all happy ones, she'd have "healed" the prince, humanize him. That was the point of the whole "you're a doll without me" thing. So it seems like she was primarily thinking about herself here.
I may be misremembering a few things, though. Can't recall much of the last chapters that well, and I honestly want your pov to be the correct one, that sounds much more interesting than a petulant child screeching for her "rightful place".
In a long, long while, I haven't felt like: "This was a good chapter".
@feha
That's a good point, and it does put a good spin on the "Heroine". But honestly, did she ever act like she was thinking about anyone but herself? In-game, the captured-target endings were all happy ones, she'd have "healed" the prince, humanize him. That was the point of the whole "you're a doll without me" thing. So it seems like she was primarily thinking about herself here.
I may be misremembering a few things, though. Can't recall much of the last chapters that well, and I honestly want your pov to be the correct one, that sounds much more interesting than a petulant child screeching for her "rightful place".