Jitsu wa Imouto deshita. ~Saikin Dekita Giri no Otouto no Kyorikan ga Yatara Chikai Wake~ - Vol. 4 Ch. 19

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@Soneko typos
Pg 6: Did Aniki wrote this? -> Did Aniki write this?
Pg 7a: It's a bit embarrasing -> It's a bit embarrassing
Pg 7b: I accidentaly stumbled upon it -> I accidentally stumbled upon it
Pg 7c: It's embarrasing for you -> It's embarrassing for you
Pg 15: Taichi-san sure knows alot -> Taichi-san sure knows a lot
Pg 20a: i see -> I see (Crossbar I)
Pg 20b: Akira wouldn't have overcame -> Akira wouldn't have overcome
Pg 22: How are you able figure things out that far but coudln't notice the most important matter!? -> How are you able to figure things out that far but couldn't notice the most important matter!? (The second half is a bit clunky, I suggest rephrasing it)
Pg 25: would have to share -> will have to share
Pg 26: as they please -> as she pleases
Pg 29a: on a separate building -> in a separate building
Pg 29b: a pair of semi-double bed -> a pair of semi-double beds
 
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@Soneko typos
Pg 6: Did Aniki wrote this? -> Did Aniki write this?
Pg 7a: It's a bit embarrasing -> It's a bit embarrassing
Pg 7b: I accidentaly stumbled upon it -> I accidentally stumbled upon it
Pg 7c: It's embarrasing for you -> It's embarrassing for you
Pg 15: Taichi-san sure knows alot -> Taichi-san sure knows a lot
Pg 20a: i see -> I see (Crossbar I)
Pg 20b: Akira wouldn't have overcame -> Akira wouldn't have overcome
Pg 22: How are you able figure things out that far but coudln't notice the most important matter!? -> How are you able to figure things out that far but couldn't notice the most important matter!? (The second half is a bit clunky, I suggest rephrasing it)
Pg 25: would have to share -> will have to share
Pg 26: as they please -> as she pleases
Pg 29a: on a separate building -> in a separate building
Pg 29b: a pair of semi-double bed -> a pair of semi-double beds
Fixed and made a few changes, appreciate the correction :)
 
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This was a great chapter and set up. Hopefully MC does not wuss out. Even if we don't get all the way to imouto sex, we need to at least get a heavy kissing scene that gets interrupted. If all we get is a weak hot spring wash my back scene, that will be a let down.
 

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