Jumidoro - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - A Chance Meeting

[MangaDex]

 

[eightrooks]

Christ, I thought this one would never upload. Got there in the end.

I probably shouldn't rush these out and give anyone unrealistic expectations about my work ethic - I'm already stretching myself way too thin, so don't expect these to be all this quick. Next one has a bunch of time-consuming redraws, as well. (The splash page alone took me hours, ugh.) But I partly upload for me, so I can see my own work more conveniently and, well, I thought the chapter was neat and felt other people ought to see it sooner rather than later, so here you go.

(Oh, and just to mention, as far as I can tell the mangaka is "Taki Koichi" (not "Hongichi"), according to the furigana over his (?) name.)

 

[mrboxeater]

bit disappointed she didnt kill him...

thanks for the chapter

 

[alkal70]

pg 20: "I mean, it's... 'trees' and so on, isn't it...?" - This bubble should be Lamne's, but wasn't given her font. You may recall that she wasn't familiar with what trees were in Chapter 1.

From the previous chapter, I'd like to issue a correction that the kana for the nation (?) of "Zeeland" reads "shi-ranzu", not "shi-rando".
You might choose to convert this "zu" sound into something like the "-ze" of "Firenze" or a soft "-nds" or "-nce" or whatever.

As for "Raktos", I think the "toasu" sound of "rakutoasu" could be better coerced into a "tois" sound, ie. Artois region of France pronounced slightly incorrectly.
Somehow I suspect that the mangaka is not pulling their names from a single consistent country of origin, so I wouldn't contort myself trying to make every name line up.

I like "Coeur" (French for "heart") as a noble family's name a little more than "Kohr", but I can accept the latter.

You're doing good, though. Keep it up.

 

[sanigo]

Random but I really like the font choice for Lamne
Thanks for translating!!

 

[77BLc9JwJGpLVARkamJx]

Now the guy gonna bring his friends and get whacked as well

 

[eightrooks]

bit disappointed she didnt kill him...

thanks for the chapter

If you haven't looked at the raws, let me assure you, Trigun this ain't (much as I like Trigun). While it may be arguing violence is bad (and I admire how it does it), it absolutely does not go the "I scared a nice old lady so now I cannot kill anyone" route.

pg 20: "I mean, it's... 'trees' and so on, isn't it...?" - This bubble should be Lamne's, but wasn't given her font. You may recall that she wasn't familiar with what trees were in Chapter 1.

Some good catches, especially this one. Gah! (All I can say is since I didn't do Ch. 1 I haven't... internalised? it as much as the others.) Also yeah, rest assured, however much more I do of this, I'm not going to tie myself in knots trying to make everything magically consistent; I'm just thankful it's not as wacky as Berserk. "Shirenze" seems to be a Twitch bikini streamer and nothing else, though, so maybe not quite that spelling. 😅

EDIT: Changed the first two things you brought up for now, we'll see about "Raktos". "Coeur" just felt a bit too fanciful for my taste, but who knows, there might be something else that persuades me it ought to be that.

 

[donpom]

Thanks for the chapter!

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[washaa]

Thank you for the chapter.