...right then.
So sorry this took forever. A bunch of reasons, though I plainly could have done it quicker, since I actually rushed through the majority of the pages over a few hours today. Hopefully I didn't totally screw anything up by going so fast - some of the masking and the redraws are pretty rough but I don't think it should read too badly.
I'm still debating whether or not to just drop doing most of the SFX. I'll probably have to in the end to save my sanity/my eyes, but at least the next two chapters are way more laid-back, so should need far fewer edits if I do stick to it - no pages full of speed lines and CRASH, WHOOSH or whatever. But we'll see. I'm more than willing to keep going, one way or the other, if people want to keep reading/nobody else steps in - I'm still very much glued to the raws.