Just You And I - Ch. 2 - Girl Talk

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You don't lose much Kotori, i seriously hate when in a couple there one who doesn't want the other to had interactions with any girls because of a pathologic jealousy. I don't like Yuki, she seem to be a serious pain in the a*s jealous GF.
 
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Beer will never betray you or reject you... Drink your worries away!
Don't actually follow this advice people XD

I agree that this was confusing to follow at times
 
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Part of the confusion may be because Miho and Yuki look so much alike… Maybe that's why Kotori went out with her in the first place, who knows? >.>
 
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pg 7, "came I come by your place?" -> "can I come by your place?"
 
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@mutopis …That despair when you've proofread the thing a bazillion times and there are still typos that fly under your radar. TTvTT
 
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I have no idea whats going on and no idea who is who. are these even the same people from the first chapter?
 
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@Vexelpops Of course they're not the same people… Yuki and her new gf just make a cameo at the end of chapter 1.
 
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I liked this chapter's story more than the previous. The first chapter had better visuals, though. Like some others, I had difficulty identifying who was who in this one.
 

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