Kaettekita Motoyuusha - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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> Lorie was so beautiful in the colored covered page.
I decided now, i will meet her tonight for some friendly chit chat

> Well, MC's daydreaming of fooling around the beautiful girls he meet anywhere, is the same like me...
I constantly simulated on my brain how to live as husband and wife with that beautiful girls.... Hahahahaha
No fooling around in my case. Just dedication... yes, dedication....
 
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😲🙄"andaluSia" or "andaluGia" ? that's the question ! 😵

and ...

😲"koru" or "yen" ? how many currencies are there in that world? 🤨
 
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flagging this for incorrect ch numbering. this is just simply ch1. if you're picking this i hope you don't repeat this mistake. there's no need to mark the part numbers if you're merging the ch as one unless when bits of the ch are missing (eg: "ch1 part 1-2" had part 3 been missing)

but i must commend you for having a better contrast than the previous version. in comparison, the older version of the color spread was overconstrasted. compare the panel on page 1 where MC says " i can finally go back"; you can see the net wall. the other group ver. had that hidden due to their contrast making the BG appear too dark
 
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@AlanAlanSteve @fiel

Actually it's fine to reupload, I don't even remember what was going on in the story anyways so it's better to read again if it's for better quality
 
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@macarroiz actually now that i think about it, you make a fair point. thanks for calling me on that.

@fiel sorry for the second mention fiel, but pay no mind to my previous comment, now that I've went and compared the two groups, yours is much better quality.
 

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