Kagekuri Kitan - Vol. 2 Ch. 5 - Phase 5

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Hmm... how to make a ninja sexy?
I know! I'll just put a slit on the crotch of her otherwise fully covered outfit & call it day.
That'll do it!
 
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Nee-san, both your mouth is in wide view, guess you don't realize with your eyes covered like that
 
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Why is the Tool covered in slimy liquid ? Did she... insert it there ??






-FAPtain was here
 
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CHOTTO MATTE !
did she really just masturbate using the vajra tool !?
why the heck the girls from that family have quite the kinky lifestyle...
 
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without Sakuya, this manga would be MORE shitty that it already is, that read head head master is super annoying! the MC is kinda lame and the old farts are nothing interesting.
 
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I like that the older generation really entrusted their clan to a young pup who has some growing to do and the story is still great with it's original premise, better than the Marvel Universe any day
 
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No shit. You do not have the qualification. Those old dudes really need to train you better.
 
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I’m baffled as to why this manga is rated so high. It’s mediocre at best, and man the author really is piling shit on the head of the clan. Not only is she apparently incompetent, but she has horrible insecurities(understandably). Well this is only to make the Mc look better, be his love interest and have a girl for ecchi things to happen to. Poor girl never stood a chance.
 

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Is that some kinda bondage clothing? This manga is very BDSM oriented from the ASS slapping in every chapter to the AHEGAO face. That's messed up..... lol.
 
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The facial expressions of when the characters feel negative feelings always give off the “insane person” feeling
 
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Ok. 5 chapters in. Let's see what we got.

The concept is interesting. Shadows and ninjas and all that. Art is pretty good too.

The loli, as usual, is an issue. But at least she's not coming off as agressive jailbat. So the damage is lessened.

MC is the standard blank slate. The safe boring option. But hey, means there's room for improvment.

But our female deuteragonist... Oh god why. Like. I get that the Loli made a point to call her out as being incompetent to the point where it is a running joke, I get that. But jesus fucking christ... she still needs to be somewhat competent despite that! And again, I am getting the message of this chapter that she is in over her head, but she still needs to show she's somewhat comparable to the protagonist, that's what a deuteragonist is! They need to be able to bounce off each other, either as characters or as far as capabilities and capacity goes. And that's not what we get when in the previous chapter she was unloading her inferiority complex (which again, is played off as a joke) on him, at which point you're just activelly making her unlikable.

So... Let's keep going and hope they improve her writting. Because, hey, deuteragonists stick around. And if that writting doesn't improve, the whole story suffers for it. Let's see how that goes.
 

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