Not really liking this set up. Treading major tragic events with such a shallow care. They're feelings are all over the place but sway so easily that doesnt feel real at all. I suppose u dont need to experience something to write about it, but at the same time if u dont measure the depths correctly is just feels rather fake. So building up a story based of fake events doesnt really supports its development.
Well, i guess im out of bounds here since the story is about a school that sells minors to rich people like its normal.
Anyway... lot of things happened but at the same time theres nothing really to gain from the story. Its just too shallow.