I’d rather have a smegma covered horse cock get rammed through my eye and into my brain than read this anally birthed abomination
That's a pretty harsh criticism. While everyone is entitled to their own opinion, allow me to try and rebuttal a bit.
It's all of chapter 4, half of it anyways. From what I've read, this is a story about revenge. A boy is brutally mistreated and abused and once he regains his sanity he obviously breaks into madness. I don't know about you or even myself, but from what I've seen from other forms of literature and our real world news, having something traumatic happen to you tends to change your perception. A form of PTSD I would think. We'll not rehash the story as it is at this point. But he goes back in time hoping that he will remember the atrocities that befell him, for obvious reasons he does.
Now, if I knew shit were about to get real in a few years, I'd do something about it. And here we are, chapter 4.1, the beginning of the end. I don't really know how the plot is because we haven't even started it.
>Deus Ex Machina in terms of him "healing" the world? It's explained by the old man in 4.1 that's what his recover does.
>OP mc? He heals. The more he heals the more he gains from the memories he has to withstand. Right now he's got nothing of the sort, but in chapter 1 he has lived years doing that heal.
>Edgelord's urban dictionary entry reads:
who uses shocking and nihilistic speech and opinions that they themselves may or may not actually believe to gain attention and come across as a more dangerous and unique person.
Our MC is not coming off as cocksure, he's angry, he knows what's happened, and he wants to take it out on the one responsible. She's a shit, she deserves it. I certainly hope you weren't expecting him to just turn the other cheek about this whole affair.
>Bland? How so? We barely know anything other than he was robbed years of his life and came back at 15. Aside from being pissed we know nothing about him.
The rest I agree with.
Here's the thing, this also goes with the other one that's around right now that LH is working on. Everyone is claiming these kids are edgelords or what-have-you from how they would be in our world. But if you step back and realize that the difference between edge and not is if the problems are real or not. I believe in Japan it's known is
Chunibyo.