Kaikosareta Kyuutei Renkinjutsushi wa Henkyou de Dai Nouen wo Tsukuriageru - Sokoku wo Oidasareta kedo, Saikyou Ryouchi de Slow Life wo Ouka suru - V…

[CapnAndy]

Id understand if you split a chapter cause the author did but this is half of a half chapter lol.

lol I was about to post “this is insanely short but that’s not your fault”

don’t split already split chapters! Death to split chapters in general.

 

[gearsky]

On Pg. 6 it looks like you forgot to add an "it's" or "it is" before "more effective that way".
I've heard that the Japanese language often omits the subject of a sentence and leaves the other party to fill it in via context, so I'm betting that in this case the text directly translated to "more effective that way", while what was really meant was "it is more effective that way". I think I saw a couple of other errors like this (I know for sure that I saw a missing "are" early on in the next chapter), so it's definitely something you need to work on.

 

[HaikenEdge]

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It's the opposite actually. The king personally asked him to help grow crops. It's his boss that's the warmonger.

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In what world does a department head overrule a king and not get his head taken?

 

[Kortez]

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In what world does a department head overrule a king and not get his head taken?

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The request to look into it was made directly to mc, in addition to his work. Why wouldn't mc just tell that to his boss? I would guess the same plot hole-ly reason someone would fire an alchemist good enough to complete all of their work ahead of schedule for trying to solve a hunger crisis during his free time.

 

[HaikenEdge]

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The request to look into it was made directly to mc, in addition to his work. Why wouldn't mc just tell that to his boss? I would guess the same plot hole-ly reason someone would fire an alchemist good enough to complete all of their work ahead of schedule for trying to solve a hunger crisis during his free time.

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Even if the king made the request directly to the MC, you'd think they'd also also tell his boss that he put him on a little pet side project to ensure the boss wouldn't interfere.

 

[G_me]

I totally didn't come here because of kemonomimi. Yep..mhmn...