Kaiten no Albus - Ch. 19 - Boring

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real fucking interesting

remind me so much of bad end theatre, looping again and again looking one happy ending that may never come or simply doesnt exist
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26
  • p1 doesn't have to die, The Hero Albus -> doesn't have to die, the hero Albus
  • p1 rewound the world with magic, Starting -> rewound the world with magic, starting
  • p1 and one girl— Repeated -> and one girl— repeated
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26
  • p1 doesn't have to die, The Hero Albus -> doesn't have to die, the hero Albus
  • p1 rewound the world with magic, Starting -> rewound the world with magic, starting
  • p1 and one girl— Repeated -> and one girl— repeated
These are just my preferences for starting sentences in a new text box with capital letters :haa:
 

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