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Fixed! Thanks for noticing.When are you guys gonna fix the typo in the credit page?
I know this might sound cliche, but I think it's the power of love.What if the solution is to play defensive against demon king? Instead of speedrunning just do slow running. Let fiona died with old age while preventing demon king get another replacement.
If the resurrection of the Demon King is dependent on the completion of the back-up vessel, he can simply kill Fiona first, prior to killing the Demon King. He might not prefer that option, but will he, eventually, have any choice?Anyways, I imagine the truth is that Fiona has always been the "perfect" vessel for the Demon King...so how do you combat that?
feels like he might take in the demon kings soul instead of her brother and he dies with the demon king I hope I am wrong thoAn ending where the hero dies so Fiona is set free and get her brother back… I can foresee it and I hate it
Thank you for taking the time to write these suggestions!Thanks for the chapter!
Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26
- p7 easy bos -> easy boss
- p9 join a hero's party -> join the hero's party
- p9 It's always people like you... who ends up dying first -> It's always people like you... who end up dying first
- p18 I always knew... you'll be fine. -> I always knew... you'd be fine.