Kaiten no Albus - Vol. 3 Ch. 23 - Sorcerer

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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26
  • p1 with a demon race -> with a demon // with one of the demon race
  • p2 in god too -> in god, too
  • p6 A while ago [...] has emerged -> A while ago [...] emerged
  • p6 A prodigy who appears once in a century -> A once-in-a-century prodigy [optional]
  • p9 It'll disappear -> They'll disappear
  • p9 make it disappear -> make them disappear
  • p11 generous too -> generous, too
  • p11 capital and my trip expenses -> capital, and for my trip expenses
  • p12 costs for maintaining the workshop and travel expenses -> costs for maintaining the workshop, and travel expenses
  • p13 for the graduate -> for the graduates // for all graduates // for each graduate
  • p13 around the world helping people -> around the world, helping people
  • p16 Someone is getting rejected -> Someone got rejected
 
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Hmm... I wonder if the magic Gina is trying to find is related to Fiona in any way. It seems that Fiona will definitely be the glue that has most of the members join them :)
 

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