Kaji Daikou no Arubaito wo Hajimetara Gakuen Ichi no Bishoujo no Kazoku ni Kiniirarechaimashita - Ch. 1

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Strong opening.
Bookmarked.

I'll come back in two years.
I'll let this author to dry age first <--not even a normal cooking
 
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Ok now my big question is… does this have a LN/WN and is it being translated ?
If so..
WHERE??!

Just a tip for everyone that usually looking for translations, a lot of novels translation including this one is available on NovelUpdates, not directly on there but the site provides the link to other site of usually all translated chapters. Just that you need to login there to be able to access the link. Also here’s the direct link for the translation
 
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Just a tip for everyone that usually looking for translations, a lot of novels translation including this one is available on NovelUpdates, not directly on there but the site provides the link to other site of usually all translated chapters. Just that you need to login there to be able to access the link. Also here’s the direct link for the translation
Thank you!!! Didn’t know I had to login to access them :meguupog:
 
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That was a relatively weak first chapter. I wonder if this is being published in a magazine with little competition that they feel that they didn't need a more interesting hook than a housekeeper protagonist.
 
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OMG, fix your transport issue. Manga-Japan. Why do we need these kids losing their parents for not rightful reason?
 
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It is pure romance between the two.

It's like Angel Next Door, but it's the guy who is actually high spec instead of the girl. Dude has the brains (Top of the class), the brawn (karate guy), the looks, and the personality (family oriented). This whole series is about this girl crushing on this guy super hard while he tries to keep it professional.
I mean, to be fair, Angle Next Door is also about how the girl is crushing hard on the guy too.
 
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In JP, they call that PERFECT ADAPTATION.
This chapter is an excellent negative example of an author having no clue about 'show, don't tell' as a writing technique.

No one refers to someone as 'hey, my best friend'

There is no reason to spend a page showcasing how beautiful a character is when you can just show them in the spotlight in a regular scene.

Why add markers for 'imagination' panels, it's obvious, is the author thinking the reader is this dim?

Why even have the final author note 'maybe they're a good match?', just let the audience make their own conclusions.

It's extremely basic stuff that makes a manga go from feeling natural to being spoonfed to a reader who just left their crib.

If anything, this chapter was so terrible at it's misuse of exposition that it ends up being a good case study of how important it is.
Artists get lazy and use recycled panels and dump the light novel texts inside the caption boxes.
 
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I've always wondered, but what the heck is with Japanese vegetable and fruit prices in general? ¥298 for 5 onions?! You can get a kilogram's worth for less here, and Finland and other Nordic countries aren't exactly known cheap for that stuff...:questionblob:
Apparently it is due to multiple factors. Climate and limited space make growing them challenging , meticulous cultivation practice which is to meet the very high expectation of consumers. Other factors also contribute . https://visitjapan.blog/why-is-fruit-so-expensive-in-japan/
 
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Shawty already looking at ma boy as a target and he ain't even started cleaning, and I hope that chick pays him extra for cleaning that pool sized living room and kitchen
 

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