Scandalous! I expected at least four from a 8500¥ love hotel room.And there is only one bed!!!
I'm just surprised that the editor recognizes him lol unless it was really so bad that it's memorable..Idk what the vetting process is like for young mangaka, so I'm unclear on how decent of a sign it is that the editor gave him a card. It's clearly better than he was expecting, but I just don't know what the next steps from here could be.
I've been to a couple of hotels like that, but so far all but 1 (can't rmb which one tho) had like some blinds on the inside.I've been to one of these hotels with a glass panel between the bathroom and the main room before...
...on a family vacation...
And before you ask, no, it was not a love hotel... which, in hindsight, was even weirder...
I haven't read said prev work, but I agree that this feels axe-able. Writing feels sloppy like the author is just trying to get it off the ground.I love the authors and their previous work, but my god this one feels easier to axe than the previous one (that was axed)
You can also see that the arm continues down to the hand at the edge of the panel. But it doesn't help that she's consistently been drawn with very long legs.The lack of tone on her arm makes it blend into the background, which makes her leg look extroudinarly thin and stylised, rather than simply being covered up by said arm.
It's minor compared to putting on makeup every morning, or doing your hair.Lol what kind of teen wears tie up panties? The amount of extra work it would take in the morning to tie up your panties instead of sliding them on would make it absolutely not worth it.
The payoff vs effort isn't the same though. People will see your hair and face all day. Is this girl expecting to show off her panties all day?You can also see that the arm continues down to the hand at the edge of the panel. But it doesn't help that she's consistently been drawn with very long legs.
It's minor compared to putting on makeup every morning, or doing your hair.
Is there any chapter you haven't seen them?The payoff vs effort isn't the same though. People will see your hair and face all day. Is this girl expecting to show off her panties all day?