Kakushite! Makina-san!! - Ch. 1

[Random_Passer-by]

When did I follow this? Not complaining, but huh... not bad for a first chapter, though him exclaiming that she's his wife when he sees her at the front door is likely a mistranslation.

Her surname is “Agatsuma”. The same kanji, with a “ga” between them, do in fact mean “my spouse”… but this is for sure a mistranslation.

Now, I'm willing to show a fair bit of leniency because the admission that this is an MTL is in the first page, along with an apology. Fine, we all have to start somewhere.
At the same time, though… calling this translation “rough” would be doing it a favour. It's… below passable, for my standards.

Below you can find an actual translation for the first ⅓ chapter. I'll admit that there are some translations I stole, but when this chapter's translation is off it's way off.

Page 1: The right part of this page has only SFX. The first panel says “hubbub”, the second says “clatter”.
hah
hah

Page 2:
Why are we here all of a sudden?
It was an emergency, alright‽
I was just about to get completely exposed to others!
What, again?
Say, can you put it in right now?
Huuuh‽ Right here‽
Just feel your way around! I can't go out like this!

Page 3:
Look, I'm completely loose already! You have to put it in!
Whoah… Machina-san…
Ah
Ahn! What are you doing‽ It's plopped out completely!
Fuck… Break-time's almost over! (“Fuck” is literally “how vexing”, BTW)
Sorry…
C'mon, just do it from behind!
Put it in at once!

Page 4:
My leg!
(Yes, you had to MTL sexual innuendos. An up-hill battle, to say the least.)

Page 5:
sfx: ding-dong
Let's go!
Ahhhh! That hit the spot!
Phew…
Please be careful! If you're exposed as a mecha at school it will be a whole scandal!
It was an accident, alright‽
A peel! A banana peel! Even a robot as sophisticated as myself couldn't have predicted it to have fallen in the school's corridors.
Of course I'll fall!
Fine, fine. Anyway the bell has rung so let's go back.

Page 6:
Right, take your seat! Class has started already!
I'm sorry I'm la~~te!
Where were you during break, anyway?
Machina…
Never fear! We called out your name!
I haven't even taken attendance yet, you know…

Page 7:
Hah…
Some things never change.
Her environment is always so bright…
A polar opposite from a class wall-flower like myself.
Actually, even though we're in the same class, we've never even interacted.
I do hold a one-sided affection for her, but we've never even discussed.
We live in different worlds.
I'm a loner, and she… is the class's, or rather the schools prima donna.

Page 8:
But, nobody knows
her secret.
Her true nature,
that no-one can ever know.
The time I came to know it,
was a few nights back.
I wonder if there's a fire somewhere. It sounds so loud.
There are even helicopters flying.

Page 9:
Hm?
There's someone here.
A girl?

Page 10:
So you're back.
Huh‽
My class-mate, Agatsuma Machina-san?
Er… why…
are you by my door?

Page 11:
I was waiting for you, Akutsu Keita.
Huh‽ You know my name‽
Yes I do. You do keep staring at me.
The class mecha-otaku, and also the robotics club's president and member.
Entrant and winner of several drone competitions, lives alone,
family lives far away, socialisation with the neighbourhood is tenuous at best.
How do you know so much about—
Ah!
This manual.
Can you understand its contents?

 

[Sayles]

Her surname is “Agatsuma”. The same kanji, with a “ga” between them, do in fact mean “my spouse”… but this is for sure a mistranslation.

Now, I'm willing to show a fair bit of leniency because the admission that this is an MTL is in the first page, along with an apology. Fine, we all have to start somewhere.
At the same time, though… calling this translation “rough” would be doing it a favour. It's… below passable, for my standards.

Below you can find an actual translation for the first ⅓ chapter. I'll admit that there are some translations I stole, but when this chapter's translation is off it's way off.

Page 1: The right part of this page has only SFX. The first panel says “hubbub”, the second says “clatter”.
hah
hah

Page 2:
Why are we here all of a sudden?
It was an emergency, alright‽
I was just about to get completely exposed to others!
What, again?
Say, can you put it in right now?
Huuuh‽ Right here‽
Just feel your way around! I can't go out like this!

Page 3:
Look, I'm completely loose already! You have to put it in!
Whoah… Machina-san…
Ah
Ahn! What are you doing‽ It's plopped out completely!
Fuck… Break-time's almost over! (“Fuck” is literally “how vexing”, BTW)
Sorry…
C'mon, just do it from behind!
Put it in at once!

Page 4:
My leg!
(Yes, you had to MTL sexual innuendos. An up-hill battle, to say the least.)

Page 5:
sfx: ding-dong
Let's go!
Ahhhh! That hit the spot!
Phew…
Please be careful! If you're exposed as a mecha at school it will be a whole scandal!
It was an accident, alright‽
A peel! A banana peel! Even a robot as sophisticated as myself couldn't have predicted it to have fallen in the school's corridors.
Of course I'll fall!
Fine, fine. Anyway the bell has rung so let's go back.

Page 6:
Right, take your seat! Class has started already!
I'm sorry I'm la~~te!
Where were you during break, anyway?
Machina…
Never fear! We called out your name!
I haven't even taken attendance yet, you know…

Page 7:
Hah…
Some things never change.
Her environment is always so bright…
A polar opposite from a class wall-flower like myself.
Actually, even though we're in the same class, we've never even interacted.
I do hold a one-sided affection for her, but we've never even discussed.
We live in different worlds.
I'm a loner, and she… is the class's, or rather the schools prima donna.

Page 8:
But, nobody knows
her secret.
Her true nature,
that no-one can ever know.
The time I came to know it,
was a few nights back.
I wonder if there's a fire somewhere. It sounds so loud.
There are even helicopters flying.

Page 9:
Hm?
There's someone here.
A girl?

Page 10:
So you're back.
Huh‽
My class-mate, Agatsuma Machina-san?
Er… why…
are you by my door?

Page 11:
I was waiting for you, Akutsu Keita.
Huh‽ You know my name‽
Yes I do. You do keep staring at me.
The class mecha-otaku, and also the robotics club's president and member.
Entrant and winner of several drone competitions, lives alone,
family lives far away, socialisation with the neighbourhood is tenuous at best.
How do you know so much about—
Ah!
This manual.
Can you understand its contents?

Thanks for these extremely detailed updates!
I've been updating as you've been editing but I have to sleep soon so I'll finish the rest tomorrow.
(And thanks for solving at least two mysteries for me:
1 - What the fuck the teacher actually said
2 - Why he seemingly called her his 'wife' (Which I realise now is because her last name literally contains the word for it)
)
I always knew that I would have no feasible chance of catching plays on words/euphemisms, but I can see that for the most part I need to look at dialogue and think "How can this be filled with more innuendo" (and tbh, perhaps just a more intelligent analysis of dialogue as if I were writing a screenplay or similar)
But yeah super big thanks

 

[Septazia]

I don't remember when nor why I bookmarked this but it at least seems interesting.

But when will the trope of the mc being scared of sex ever end. Sigh...

Probably same reason as I did, some weeks ago an anime adaptation was announced, you went looking for the manga and noticed nobody had translated it.

 

[Levankua]

...3d?

I got distracted by this too. You can really feel it when you try to read yhe characters expressions as the angle changes. Not terrible but distracting. Concept is fun enough. Bit of ecchi romcom with a touch of mystery in the background. Will give more chapters a try.

 

[ImNotCreativeEnoughtForThese]

And what's the first? I'm asking for... reasons...

Daddy's Sexy Doll, its on Manga Segz (Dex). I'd hate to tell you anything about it since I suck at promoting things or whatver but It was a rather interesting read.

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[tonie]

followed cuz Anime was announce not too long ago

Iiiinterestiiiiing.

But honestly speaking it'd be more interesting to add a bit of mystery at the beginning starting from him admiring her at school and then the explosion at her house before it is revealed that she's a robot since I didn't really read synopsis or any of the tags. And while I thought that Makina sounds pretty close to mecha or machina I dismissed it as probably just coincidence or something (after all Makina can be a legit Japanese name I think).

Well, her pulling her leg out of a joint and reattaching it was a bit surprising but with a different way...

 

[Kurbo]

Honestly, I'm following this if just for it's style. The way they are posing the 3D models while also drawing on their expressions really make pictures.

 

[Fobban]

Feels a bit like Koikatsu style art, just a bit edited from it.

 

[K-Lye]

Nice.. this is getting an anime adaptation